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Chris Fawthrop's avatar

Wow I love this, I'm definitely going to be rereading this again and again!

Thank you for an in-depth explanation and exploration of this. I'll be checking out "A Pattern Langauge!"

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Terri Lonier, PhD's avatar

Michael, this is such a logical, inspired, and valuable extension of your thinking and experience in music and architecture. It is a gift to writers. Thank you for sharing it with the world.

Plus, wow. Just wow. 🙏 ⭐️🤯

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S Biro's avatar

This is brilliant. Thank you for creating and sharing it. This essay lands before my eyeballs at the exact moment I was literally throwing my hands up in the air thinking, f*%ck(!) I will never ever get this!!!! I especially love the drawings. So....I'm now on (self guided) course on offer here. Again, thank you.

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Bryce Wafflebeaver's avatar

I found this helpful. My degree has been in civil engineering and my career has been mostly commercial construction projects.

My reading/writing only recently started to improve and I think the connection from architecture to the composition of essays have resonated with me. I’m hopeful that my writing will improve. There’s a lot of space for improvement.

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CansaFis Foote's avatar

…only 56,815,128,661,595,284,938,812,255,859,275 more essays to go and I will be complete…

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Rosie Whinray's avatar

The diagrams help me to understand. I like their handmade quality too. I think there's real juice in the combination of word and image.

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Jes Raymond's avatar

Wow. THANK YOU. I read "A Pattern Language" in my liberal arts college, in a class where we were discussing the ecological and political implications of structure and design. I can not wait to read how you break this down. I also want to revisit Christopher Alexander, since I remember how much that book opened my mind.

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Alex Dobrenko`'s avatar

you had me at "you don't need Rick Rubin"

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David P. Stoker's avatar

Very interesting! If you'd like to see a parallel example of teaching using a pattern language, I refer to a paper in this post, which also introduces Christopher Alexander's concept. The example is teaching video game design. https://open.substack.com/pub/goprefigure/p/how-to-think-like-a-video-game-designer

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Tai's avatar

Thank you for existing.

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Sean Oliver's avatar

Where can this scoring criteria be found?

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tokyoterri aka Antaidian's avatar

musing: what would a grio’s pattern language be?

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DeeJay Hart's avatar

Though the poll is closed (I joined Essay Club just a few days ago), I'm putting my vote in for a Summary of All Patterns in One spot! In this regard, what did you decide to send?

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Vimal Patel's avatar

Have you seen or heard about, Jonathan Pageau, by any chance,

Michael?

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Grant Shillings's avatar

This sounds like a really cool concept. I am a big fan of grand theories and architectures. I actually enjoy reading (good) textbooks because they can provide this: rather than just facts, a new pair of glasses through which to view the world. More colors, because we can name them.

For example, "Rules of Play" is on of the most popular textbooks on video game design. It provides a comprehensive structure for how to analyze video games in three dimensions: Rules, Play, and Culture. But there are 33 total chapters, which break these dimensions down further, and then tie them back together.

I'm gonna check out some of your examples and explanations of the terms to get a grasp on how this whole architecture works

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Glenn Stovall's avatar

do you have a printer-friendly version of this graph? I want to hang it on my wall where I work

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